Tuesday, November 9, 2010

estrella: Blogger 13: Catw 5 How to do one thing at a t...

estrella: Blogger 13: Catw 5 How to do one thing at a t...: "People do better their task when they do single tasks and multi-tasking peers do poor task. According to the author there are many methods t..."

I believe your the essay is too short and I didn't see the author claim. The only thing that I saw is that you summarize the author evidence not yours. Next time make sure pur your own claim like I believe that when people multi- tasking.......... What you need to do is write some evidence and some examples from your onwn experiences. Keep working hard that you almost there.

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